Take a look at the following examples of children's dialect-based
miscues while reading and the difference between the child's original response
(OR) and expected response (ER). Then answer the questions that follow.
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OR:
It my little monkey here.
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ER:
Is my little monkey here?
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OR:
We got to tell.
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ER:
We've got to tell.
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OR:
Frog look at Toad calendar.
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ER:
Frog looked at Toad's calendar.
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OR:
A word what sounded good.
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ER:
A word that sounded good.
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OR:
hisself
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ER:
himself
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OR:
I can come to your party?
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ER:
Can I come to your party?
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Are these children's miscues evidence of proficient or
non-proficient reading? Explain. If you were teaching children who made
these miscues, what, if any, assistance or teaching would you offer?
I would think the
student is a proficient reader based on the chart above. However, comprehension questions following
the reading would determine if the reader was truly proficient or not. I think the original responses show
proficiency because the miscues didn’t lead to a loss of meaning. Using the incorrect punctuation mark in the
first example could possibly change the meaning more than having a miscued
word. I think “hisself” is a common
mistake even with adults. The child has
probably heard others, maybe even adults, say “hisself.” I think the last response was definitely learned
in the child’s environment. Posing a
question in statement form is something I have often heard people do, and I’m
sure I’ve done it myself when causally talking.
It seems as though the student(s) involved in this chart may benefit
from lessons about verbs, subject-verb agreement, and tenses or inflectional endings.
If I were teaching these children I
would bring it to their attention that often the way we talk isn’t correct/proper
English. I would emphasize that while
reading and writing we want to strive to use proper English. I feel this is important to learn at an early
because they will be expected to use proper English throughout school and into
their careers. This past year I had a
student, actually one of my brightest students, always use the phrase “ain’t no”
when speaking; “There ain’t no more soap.
I don’t got no pencil.” I knew
she was hearing these phrases at home and had no idea they were actually
incorrect. I continually corrected her,
in a positive way, and even provided an explanation for her about why using
those phrases are considered incorrect.
She seemed to understand, but continued to compose her sentences in that
manner. I felt as though it was a habit
that would take some time to break. Even
though her sentences hadn’t lost meaning, I still felt it necessary to correct
her because I felt like it could hinder her in the future or maybe even
embarrass her when she is older and someone comments negatively after something
she says. Therefore, I would offer
assistance to the children who made the mistakes in the chart above as
well. I don’t feel the need to correct
every single miscue a student makes, but if I notice a repeating pattern with a
child’s miscues I am definitely going to correct them. That’s why I’m there…to teach them things
they wouldn’t learn at home.
Nikole,
ReplyDeleteIt is the teacher's role to "teach them things they wouldn't learn at home". I believe this as well. It is amazing the things students learn from home behaviors. It is our job to jump in and lead to to behaviors in which they can utilize once they venture out into society.
Looking at these student responses while reading, I would diagnose them to be proficient as well. Their miscues seemed to be tiny and irreverent when determining meaning of the text. However, to be sure we would be need to examine comprehension questions. A proficient reader reads effectively and efficiently, meaning they are reading and making few errors and still able to make meaning. I love how you related the miscues to things from their communities or phrases they may have heard. This is often a common problem when it comes to speaking correct English. Technology is also making it harder and harder to be proficient in the English Language. While it is easier to correct one's spelling and sentence formation within writing, it cannot help diagnose problems that we encounter while speaking. One example that may effect student's miscues could be seen through the use of text messages. Because texting is so easy, I think that a lot of users use short hand English in order to get a quick message across and to receive quick feedback. I belive technology, along with family interaction, and peer involvement can really lead to misconceptions concerning correct context and meanings that can arise.